The story of you dancing before school with the curtains open was both adorable and sad. That stupid dude making fun of you is a bummer! But how much you love to dance was captured wonderfully.
I also really enjoyed the way you wrote this piece. You are so good at describing sound and coming up with interesting metaphors/smilies, like ‘shark circle’, ‘dorothy’s tornado’ etc
🤣🤓🥰 Its very vivid in here. Sometimes it’s so vivid it’s almost like a cartoon with a soundtrack and everything. So I’m glad it translates well.
And ohhhhh yeah. There are many reasons I say, “when I moved away from my hometown of Hell” because that stuff was rampant. And it went right up the food chain to the adults. A lot of alcoholism, prejudice, abuse, and weird culty stuff going on in those hush-hush rural reaches. I zoomed from that place the moment I got my graduation butterfly wings and never looked back. ✨🦋✨
The story of you dancing before school with the curtains open was both adorable and sad. That stupid dude making fun of you is a bummer! But how much you love to dance was captured wonderfully.
I also really enjoyed the way you wrote this piece. You are so good at describing sound and coming up with interesting metaphors/smilies, like ‘shark circle’, ‘dorothy’s tornado’ etc
Great piece :)
🤣🤓🥰 Its very vivid in here. Sometimes it’s so vivid it’s almost like a cartoon with a soundtrack and everything. So I’m glad it translates well.
And ohhhhh yeah. There are many reasons I say, “when I moved away from my hometown of Hell” because that stuff was rampant. And it went right up the food chain to the adults. A lot of alcoholism, prejudice, abuse, and weird culty stuff going on in those hush-hush rural reaches. I zoomed from that place the moment I got my graduation butterfly wings and never looked back. ✨🦋✨
I’ve heard similar things about rural areas. Good you could spread your wings and fly away. :)
Sooooo good!